I spent a good part of my day looking busy at my computer and blowing people off while listening to this. Believe me, it was an easy choice to make once I started listening. It's so much fun hearing something I wrote, especially when it is done so wonderfully. I especially loved the part where Rodney is shot and John has to save him with the device. When I wrote it, I could easily hear John's desperation in my head, but I always worried that it didn't come across in the written word. I think you captured that frantic, desperate tone perfectly and truly added to the experience of the fic. Thanks so much for doing such a great job with this!
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